Hi it me Chris.T from room 9 you might want to change the background because it kinda hard to read and try to make the colors suite and transition will be great to hook someone in to make them feel like they want to read and comment on your work.
Hi Dayton, it's me Helisa from Room Nine. I would first just like to say that your goals are incredible and accurate. I really like the background and how it's really popping. It's great. The only thing I would consider is to proof read and edit before you post anything.
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Hi it me Chris.T from room 9 you might want to change the background because it kinda hard to read and try to make the colors suite and transition will be great to hook someone in to make them feel like they want to read and comment on your work.
ReplyDeleteHi Dayton, it's me Helisa from Room Nine. I would first just like to say that your goals are incredible and accurate. I really like the background and how it's really popping. It's great. The only thing I would consider is to proof read and edit before you post anything.
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