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Wednesday 14 March 2018

All about me


This is some work on all about me and the things I like .

12 comments:


  1. Hi my name is Harlem.
    I like your work and your picture.
    Add more details please.
    Have you re-read it and check if it makes sense.

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    1. Thank u my brother for commenting to my blog and for saying i like Ur picture.
      Dayton

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  2. Hi my name is Karson.
    I really like your work and your money stairs.
    Maybe next time try to use full stops.
    How do you get your picture to turn green?

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    1. sup karson i am happy that i got comments and if u want to know how to make ur photos green ask ur teacher if u can go on webcam and thanks for saying things i need to do.
      Dayton

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  3. Talofa my names is toa.
    I like your PS4 picture.
    Next time, put a full stop at the end of your writing
    Why do you cry for money and why do you think your mom and dad is going to split up

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    1. Talofa lava toa thanks for say u like my ps4 picture and and for commenting on my blog.
      Dayton

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  4. malo lelei my name is fetuli.

    I like your PS4 picture and i like your work that you done at your class make sure you put full stop at the end of your writing why do cry for money and why did you cry for your mum and dad going to split up.

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    1. hi dayton i like your effort it is nise writing and it is good good work

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    2. Hi fetuil thanks for commenting on my blog i cry for money because i realy wanna go to my uncle's house up north and my mum and dad might fight and then split.
      Dayton

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  5. Hi dayton I like how you did your photo of your self and the other photo that you did you about me. You need to make the text box big?
    Come on my blog here it is Edhillskylahw.blogspot.co.nz

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    1. OK thanks for commenting on my work and i saw the video

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  6. wot video my video yes or no

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